tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post2383791485095562753..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: ForeignerAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-90818702331572861852011-10-11T10:27:31.574-04:002011-10-11T10:27:31.574-04:00Mindlove- You're too sweet, really appreciate ...Mindlove- You're too sweet, really appreciate that:)<br /><br />Pat, I totally get that and it does seem like true natures appear in such instances- I've felt like that for a while now. Great Feedback as always<br /><br />Brian- completely agree, finding home or returning back to your home has a great aura about it. Especially when you don't know what home is, and then out of the blue, you just know. Great feedback as always<br /><br />Reflections, Shawna, Mama- Really glad you all enjoyed the piece, means a lot to hear that:)<br /><br />Raven- Totally agree with that line of thought. Sometimes, and too often might I add, we do feel like foreigners in our own world, our own story- even within our own person, great insight. Glad you enjoyed the write and a lot of it resonated in your own experience. Great feedback as usual, thanks-really appreciate itAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-45083273831033287852011-10-11T09:17:31.485-04:002011-10-11T09:17:31.485-04:00I love the elegance of this. Beautifully written....I love the elegance of this. Beautifully written.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-27124650477710169192011-10-11T04:42:52.925-04:002011-10-11T04:42:52.925-04:00I don't feel like the poem is just about being...I don't feel like the poem is just about being away from one's own country. It could work that way as well I guess.<br /><br />I can relate to the feelings of frustration in communicating with others. The doggy head tilt is very appropriate for how it is. I'm thinking "Am I not speaking English?" and we all are...:D The struggle to find the right word to fit is frustrating for both parties -- I see the duality there. <br /><br />A lot portrayed in this poem seems familiar to me.Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-74673694970777569712011-10-10T17:29:58.571-04:002011-10-10T17:29:58.571-04:00Wow. This is so powerful and gripping. I love thes...Wow. This is so powerful and gripping. I love these sections:<br /><br />"As it’s hard to determine the patience of each hour,<br />When you’re only speaking aloud in the warmth of the shower’s flow"<br /><br />"A dark alley, tumbling with trash, lined with sleeping feet, clothed in wares I’d burn."<br /><br />~Shawna (iamthat-shawna.blogspot.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-59857203639289863412011-10-10T17:20:05.079-04:002011-10-10T17:20:05.079-04:00Powerful, observant piece... to know without knowi...Powerful, observant piece... to know without knowing, to understand without words. Beautiful write!Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-55829302518730362012011-10-10T17:09:43.039-04:002011-10-10T17:09:43.039-04:00nice...finding home or a piece of home has a great...nice...finding home or a piece of home has a great feel to it...i know that feeling of disconnect but also the fascination of watching that world around you...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-89423225289343391172011-10-10T16:21:59.493-04:002011-10-10T16:21:59.493-04:00Great look at what can be a trying time, as people...Great look at what can be a trying time, as people look for their place and come to a new land in search of the so called dream and such. Then out of the blue, home can find them, finally realizing what they wanted all along has found them. Also isn't it quite interesting when people don't think your listening or think you can't understand them, what they say. Then you truly learn their true nature. Just something that popped in as I read.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-18535854512598144902011-10-10T15:40:48.666-04:002011-10-10T15:40:48.666-04:00http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2011/10/08/the...http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2011/10/08/the-versatile-blogger-award/<br /><br />Just wanted to remind you that you are fabulous!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com