tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post1052449455849894107..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: A Blurring HazeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-7560827546808103932011-08-11T13:26:08.148-04:002011-08-11T13:26:08.148-04:00Rose, thanks I'm glad you enjoyed the write. ...Rose, thanks I'm glad you enjoyed the write. I really enjoy your poetry as well, so I'm thrilled to hear your feedback, thanks for stopping byAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-83980842420361112492011-08-10T19:49:30.768-04:002011-08-10T19:49:30.768-04:00"Cosmetic dwells in capes of grey
Cringe the ..."Cosmetic dwells in capes of grey<br />Cringe the trigger fore the lance<br />Lest the Shangri-La awaken by chance<br />Proffering a return to an amoebic state"<br /><br />knocked me over, fantastic write my friend ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-23618799523338832362011-08-10T14:07:00.929-04:002011-08-10T14:07:00.929-04:00Thanks for the comments, really enjoy reading them...Thanks for the comments, really enjoy reading them. Glad you all enjoyed the piece, OLN is a lot of fun and I'm happy to be a part of it. Thanks againAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-21602229510398033542011-08-10T05:46:15.258-04:002011-08-10T05:46:15.258-04:00Interesting use of imageryInteresting use of imageryJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-73913352120368544032011-08-09T20:01:04.429-04:002011-08-09T20:01:04.429-04:00Lest the Shangri-La awaken by chance...this line a...Lest the Shangri-La awaken by chance...this line alone is begging another poem be written! I want to see it awaken! You owned the mic tonight,friend! But, I think we're coming to expect that of you...oh! oh! ;)Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-80427541704634553542011-08-09T19:00:58.263-04:002011-08-09T19:00:58.263-04:00Love the play on amnesia and reminding, as usual a...Love the play on amnesia and reminding, as usual another great write, love the "Apocalyptic promenades" combinationPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-55418384821993690072011-08-09T18:58:10.305-04:002011-08-09T18:58:10.305-04:00vivid images here; like these lines:
"Yet co...vivid images here; like these lines:<br /><br />"Yet conjoined are amnesia tics in question form<br />Reminding you what won’t go forward"Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-53361688895644066562011-08-09T18:48:48.227-04:002011-08-09T18:48:48.227-04:00second stanza is my fav...and the last has surely ...second stanza is my fav...and the last has surely a haunting feel to it..unable to move forward...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com